Re: critique my resume please
I formatted and re-worded your resume just a bit to give it a different look to see what you think. Work on it a bit more - - but your almost there. Try and keep it to one page.
Just some suggestions:
Don't tell the employer what you want - but use your resume to tell the prospective employer what you offer them. Their always looking for someone who can become a leader, who will also fit in well as a team member/player. If you've worked with any teams or improved any processes - let them know and how you presented your ideas. If you helped other employes - not as a supervisor - but as a team player - let them know. IE. I helped new employes understand the process and importance of........
Perhaps they have another position and will find that your abilities are a good fit (VS the previous tasks that you've performed)
Good luck with the Job hunting.
Last edited by BrianBrave; Jul 1, 2010 at 06:24 PM.