Originally Posted by PNA
Great start. Just a couple thoughts from the peanut gallery. I know the professionals will continue to work their majic.
- We can charge $15 if we get the winery. (in Advance) Do $20 on site?
- You can reduce the verbage under the Charity section. Do primary info / mission and put the link. That should shorten it up and make the font larger and more legible.
- Reminder, we are including motorcycles and trucks vans. Need to include distinction in reg form etc.
- Add a place holder for location.
- Leave room or adjust to make sure sponsor logos can be prominent.
KEEP THE SSB Concept!! I love it.
Carry on!
Just some thoughts on the flyer and the above.
Very nice work!
(Mind, I've not seen a lot of car show flyers so those in the know please chime in)
1) Definitely remove or shorten the Charity copy and leave room for the sponsor logos (we're getting more I assume?) Also, do we note that we are giving away gift bags? 50, first come? Sponsors should get priority over our club logo (we appear enough on the flyer...show them some love)
2) Should you identify the categories for judging specifically here?
3) As noted, I believe we said there was a MC category too (yes?), if so add a MC wheel to the left side bar, and note that on the bottom left list
4) "Charity Drive" - this is a benefit or fund raising event for NCSR - As such I'd like to know if people think there is more pull from the charity angle vs COM angle. If so, we should use the headline space for promoting the "charity" event sponsored by COM. The notion of "Animal Rescue" has some pull, would like to see that worked in if we go that route. I'm sure Dave can get some pointers from the NCSR folks on what works for them.
5) Pricing - just wanted to understand if leaving that open for discussion depending upon the venue?
6) Printing - are we intending to use a color flyer? If you plan to run this as B/W (one color) please do a test. (the orange will get lost in a one color print job)
7) Design comment - love the wheels on the left edge, would be sharp if you lined up the center of the wheels vertically. (sorry couldn't help myself :P)
Good work guys!