i am a part time writer so decided to compose a little prose. I know the format here wont look right but pretend it looks like poetry format. CROSSFIRE the whole of me resides in a crossfire of emotion of passions, with ribbons of road beneath me, calling for my love I hear the hum of sweetness in my ears gears at my fingertips creating poetry to our souls I feel her soft smooth skin against me and revel at its beauty and color, I see her sparkle shimmering silver all around me draws glitter of her eyes green and glowing burning warmth into my soul, Her graphite dress glides in the wind as it moves aside to let her pass and acknowledge her beautiful shape and figure, I know the crossfire of my passions that beg for me to caress and care for her and love her with my every touch, her sparkle for me, some would say my lady is inamite as her lover I feel her spirit soul and her energy every time we touch one another, every time we take to the roads of our passions we make love with the energy of the whole of what we are as one, a crossfire of emotion and a crossfire of design the crossfire of one

 

i know get a life but i love my car :lol: :lol: 8) 8)

 

WOW!

I guess the prose is better than having to watch Celine, but it really is just a car........

But I have to admit I really do feel cool when I am driving it!!!! 8)

 

ok maybe it is a little thick i guess, sorry, i tend to write more for femine appreciation how many guys do we know that read poetic dribble, i gotta get a life lol :lol: :roll: 8)

 

OK, here goes...

There was a young man from Kischon,
That considered buying a Nissan,
Looked at a Crossfire,
And then said, "I'm no liar,"
"That rice burner now I must Pass on..."

OK, so it's cheesy...but it's late and I'm tired....

 

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I think you got the wrong vowel in there to rhyme correctly :lol: :roll: :lol:

 

Wow, tough crowd.

OK, with apologies to William Blake:

Crossfyre, Crossfyre, black and gray,
On the streets of the East Bay,
What Teutonic hand and eye
Designed thy beautiful bootay?

In the deepest Concord nights
Will burn the fire of thine headlights
When thine low tires begin to spin
So fast you can't read "Michelin."

Thy spoiler's small, thy windows smaller
And look, a Subaru art taller
Yet fearful still you seem to be
Did they who made the K make thee?

Crossfyre, Crossfyre, black and gray,
On the streets of the East Bay,
What Teutonic hand and eye
Designed thy beautiful bootay?

 

Wow...I'm the marketing director for a manufacturer in the computer industry and what I wouldn't give for our customers to wax so poetic about our products! I wonder if the head of Marketing for DCX checks out this site?

You all are way too cool.

 

retro-sexual man does not read and nor even think about poetry. (he he)

 

Sure they do - they just tend to be more to the point.....

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I have a Crossfire
And you wish you did too!!!!

8)

 

:shock: :roll: HMMMM...... I would have thought a man would write:

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I have a Crossfire
And you don't ...

:wink:

 

Vegas, be nice!!!

 

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Alabaster is awesome
other colors are okay too

 

The actual "first" version was:

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
I have a Crossfire,
So screw you!!

But I thought it might **** off a few members, so I did a last minute rewrite....

But at least now you know the original thought pattern!

:lol:

 

:lol: Now that's more like what I was expecting from you!!! :roll:

I like that version better :!:

 

ok ok maybe im too close to my femine side or maybe i just havnt been close enough to a femine's side lately. glad everybody is enjoying this topic and i can take all the ego masculinity and pokes in jest. I have been into cars since i reached the age of male awareness and they have always been like almost as fine as the female of our species and all i was really trying to say was I LOVE MY CROSSFIRE and it brings out the best feelings in me like the touch and attentions of the oppiste sex personally I would rather have the attentions of the oppisite sex but boy does this car LIGHT MY FIRE :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: 8)